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Thursday, 23 May 2019

SoSt work

Back in the old days like 1850 I've been struggling to get food I was as skinny as a pencil I was really desperate to get a job and finally pay taxes. but maybe I don´t wanna do it in London then later that day I saw a poster and that poster was written all over it, it said New Zealand had more opportunities.

I left for New Zealand on the 14th of May 1850. I had no idea what to expect except it was a hundred days by boat.

The trip was horrible because it was stormy windy I had only a little bit shelter I had a lot of food 

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Tamati,

    Kei te pai e tama! this is a very good piece of work! Something you need to work on is punctuation, something I really like is when you put down the dates and made it really sound first person!

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