Back in the old days like 1850 I've been struggling to get food I was as skinny as a pencil I was really desperate to get a job and finally pay taxes. but maybe I don´t wanna do it in London then later that day I saw a poster and that poster was written all over it, it said New Zealand had more opportunities.
I left for New Zealand on the 14th of May 1850. I had no idea what to expect except it was a hundred days by boat.
The trip was horrible because it was stormy windy I had only a little bit shelter I had a lot of food
Kia Ora Tamati,
ReplyDeleteKei te pai e tama! this is a very good piece of work! Something you need to work on is punctuation, something I really like is when you put down the dates and made it really sound first person!