Quickly, i rushed into p.e saying sorry for being late
Near the ending of the quarter, the basketball got throwing against the wall
Beyond, the ending of the edge i almost fell
Point- State the point you wish to make.
Evidence- 2-3 Sentences that give evidence to your point
Explain- 3-4 sentences that explains your evidence in relation to your point / question.
Link- back to your point - 1-2 sentence. -
to the next paragraph - i sentence
Point- Everyone knows it's better to read the book than watch the movie.
Evidence - For example , the movie made of Wonder is very different from the book. it leaves out lots of information. in the book the main teacher is female but in the movie they are male. also, the camp incident missed out the info about auggies hearing aide.
Explain- This incident made more sense in the book because he was bullied for having his lobo ears which made him look different. it didn't make sense to bully him in the movie without them.
Link- for these reasons, the book was clearly better than the movie. however you can enjoy the movie without reading the book
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